Feedback from draft pages

  

• The font of the mast head doesn't work well with the rest of the design.
• The image isn't full sized and the hair of the male is cut off.
• If the image was full sized, then the male's afro could be over the text/mast head.
• The eyes of the male do not look quite right- no attitude is reflected
• The wink should be more exaggerated so it is clear and identifiable
• The barcode is too large.

 

• There is too much space at the top
• The layout of text is messy and needs to be more precise
• The image is simple and something needs to be added, such as a quote
• The hand on the hip pose is taken on the front cover too
• The spelling of 'Urban' is wrong

 

• Headline could be improved
• 3 column structure would be more suitable and appealing
• More text is needed
• Text font size is too large (18) needs to be smaller
• The pull quote needs to be taken from the interview.